Now most of you know I love acting and singing, but I also love to write. Here's a little of a section I have started on. It is about a boy who's father gets cancer. Please tell me what you think and give me some advice.
The cool spring mist hovers through the air , like a ghost, as a red bird hums the first note of her beautiful and breath taking song. Josh, however, has just peeled his eyes open and is shielding them from the blinding sun light. Josh moves sluggishly across the room and hits the mute button on his monotonous alarm clock. His stomach is tight and his thoughts are racing through his mind like a stampede of horses running from the mighty tiger.
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